Frozen in my presence,
Melting on spot,
Heat rising pulse racing.
Looking, staring, hoping and gazing.
Palms sweating, sight blurring.
Heart beating, thumping, and chasing.
Chasing what I have been observing.
Observing what I have been waiting.
Waiting for something to make me start breathing.
Breathing like I never have before.
Staring at something amazing,
Too bright, making my eyes soar.
Soaring, flying, spirit rising.
Descending, falling, right back into place.
Into that place where I have been gazing.
That place that I have been waiting.
Appearing, mounting, into thin air.
Could I believe that you,
Are right now and right there?
When I have been looking everywhere.
I finally have no time to spare.
I must go where you are standing,
Right over there.
To tell you I have been living in despair.
Agonizing pain, with you not being there.
I want my heart beating like it did when you,
Were here and right there.
...Love at first sight?
Jester Said:
on June 15, 2008 at 12:33 pm
I lost my breath towards the middle of the poem.
Very creative
Enchantuer Said:
on June 15, 2008 at 12:43 pm
thaaanx jester ;p
purelyorchid Said:
on June 15, 2008 at 4:06 pm
taaaaaaaaaaaaagged!!;p
journal entry Said:
on June 15, 2008 at 5:02 pm
i love seeing old ppl in love!
Enchantuer Said:
on June 16, 2008 at 11:43 am
Pure: Yaaaaay !!!
JE: yes adorable wala !!
Harlow Said:
on June 16, 2008 at 2:22 pm
I love the poem wayid
Ruby Woo Said:
on June 16, 2008 at 4:14 pm
Nice..
ldiaries Said:
on June 16, 2008 at 6:17 pm
i dont believe in love at first sight but i believe you can meet someone then GET to know him and THEN fall in love,, and many people “judge books by their covers”
Enchantuer Said:
on June 16, 2008 at 7:01 pm
harlow: aww thanx *blushes*
Ruby woo: thanx
Idiaries: i dont either ;p i beleive in LUST at first sight but not love ;p ehheheh
anonymous Said:
on June 16, 2008 at 7:03 pm
wala ur post makes me wana fall in love at first sight!
lovely! ;D
Coconut Said:
on June 16, 2008 at 7:09 pm
it was amazing.. luved it
and no i dnt beleive in luv at first sight. I think love grows and blossoms with time.
Enchantuer Said:
on June 16, 2008 at 7:29 pm
anon: eheheheh maybe u wil
oo mashkoora ;**
Coconut: thaaaaaaank u ! :$ glad u did!! i think so too !!
Coconut Said:
on June 16, 2008 at 8:17 pm
send me ur email plzz
Enchantuer Said:
on June 17, 2008 at 9:39 am
i will bas 7ag sh7aga?! ;p
fadidra Said:
on June 17, 2008 at 4:43 pm
WOW-WEEH!
thats what I call post-makes-you-wonder- why-you-still-single ;p
Enchantuer Said:
on June 17, 2008 at 6:49 pm
loooooool ;p exactly!
The Archer Said:
on July 10, 2008 at 11:15 pm
1. Yes I do believe in love at first sight. *sigh*
2. Darn girl.. that is HOT. Mashallah 3alaich.. you’re a very talented poet. It really moved me.. on many levels. I loved it.
3. You’re gonna have to elaborate on what inspired this little piece of heaven
Enchantuer Said:
on July 10, 2008 at 11:37 pm
1. really?
i dont ! ehheeheh
2. aww thanx :$
3. nothing really walla ;p just go where my imagination takes me i guess ;p