Another Love Story (part 10 Finale)

“sara?? Sara ma ghairha? Sara ili baghat t5areb baini oo baina?! How could he sink that low? Does he know how cheap she is?! Yadri inha kalemat flan oo 3elan? yadri inha.. istaghferelah mabi a7e6 ib themeti..”

Mays: Bas sayra moshkela, i5ta za3lana 3alaih o mo rathya tkalma ib hal seba.

Mother: haw laish??

Mays: madri, 3ad kanaw rabe3 7ail, bas i5ta mo rathya ina ya5eth’ha.

“ee 3ashan tadri 3an sowalifha oo sya3at’ha!”

Mother: wee wee wee! inzain o meta ib ya56ebha.

Mays: madri wala yuma bas lail7en mo aked 7achi bas.

Mother: eeeeh zain ashwa.

And she looks at Lamees with sympathy in her eyes, Lamees thought she had imagined it. “She couldt feel sorry for me, it was because of them that my dream shattered into pieces.”

A week later, Lamees was in her car on her way to her friend’s house. Her phone rang, she saw the number. Without thinking she hit the flasher o ra7at 3ala 7arat il amaan. She stared down at her phone, in shock not believing what she was seeing. It was bader calling her. Then it stopped ringing. “Did that just happen? She kept on staring at it, why would he be calling me? isnt he getting married soon? Was he going to say goodbye? I’m not up for that!” She jumped when her phone vibrated in her hands, it was a message from him.

Bader: Sorry dagait 3aalaich, i could understand why u wouldnt want to talk to me, bas abi akalmich.

Without thinking, she called him back. It rang once.

Bader: aloo!

As soon as she heard his voice, a tear fell on her cheek, “i missed him”.

Bader: alo?

Lamees: halaa.

Bader:….

“why did he go quiet? Did he feel the same way? Hah! i doubt, Lamees he forgot u, hes getting married.”

Lamees: alo?

Bader: shlonich lamees?

Lamees: il 7imdela, inta shlonik?

Bader: zain….

Silence, she could tell it was as hard for him as it was for her.

Bader: wainich?

She just realised that she was parked on the side of the highway.

Lamees: ray7a bait refejti, laish?

Bader: la madri, met3awed as2elech hal so2al.

Lamees: shbaghait bader?

Bader: madrii lamees min wain abdii…

Lamees:..

Bader: athen inich sema3..

Lamees: ee sema3t.

Bader: 3an shno?

Lamees: mo ib tetzawaj sara?

Bader: mno galich batzawaj?

Lamees: bas tkalemha?

Bader: Lamees shfeech tetkalemain chethi?!

Lamees: bader inta 5alseni shno tabi ?!

Bader: awal shay hadii a3sabich ana mo dag atnajar weyach!

Lamees: mani imhadya a3sabi! inta laish dag? shtabi? shili baini o bainik 3asha…

Bader: Lamees wala il 3atheem lail7een a7ibich.

Lamees: LATCHATHEB! OO LATA7LEF CHITHB!!

Bader: wala il 3atheem mo ga3ed achathib YAH!

Lamees: bader?! int yanait!? int btetzawaj!!

Bader: MNO GALICH BATZAWAJ!

Lamees: kilman yadri!

Bader: istaghferelaaah. inzain momken matsar5een 3ashan a3arf akalmich al7een?

Lamees: shno?

Bader: oo momken ma tanzereeen ya3ni?

Lamees: ok.

Bader: ok ana kalamt sara bint 5alti, wala mali niya ini atzawajha, wala li niya 7ata a7ibha sadgeeni! ana dag awathe7lich kilshay?

Lamees: shno ya3ni i5ti itges 3alay?

Bader: la i5tich matges 3alaich intay sem3eeni al7een, intay t3arfeen a6ba3 sara, o t3arfeen ihya shlon sayra, madri 7asait ro7i wala shay min hadaiteeni, wala il 3atheem thi3t, o malegait jidam wayhi ila ihya, mojarad sowalif, o gamat tdeg 3lay kilyom, o ksarat 5a6ri il bint…

Lamees: ya3ni ib teqna3ni inik malik shighel feeha mathalan?

Bader: Lamees, bet5alini akamil wela la?

Lamees: kamil.

Bader: il mohim, ta3aligat feeni, oo ana mithel matgoleen ta3awadt 3alaiha, o ymken thalamt’ha weyay madri Lamees bas wala makan ib neyeti shay, o il habla ra7at gaalat 7ag omha inha itkalemni, o omha il yom il thani yayatni itgol yala meta ta56eb binti? tara itha 3abalich sara habla tara 7ata omha ahbal minha. Oo ana al7een mibtelesh feehom, mifteshel min ahali kilihom lanha fthe7atni bil 3ayla kilaha. o kilman 3abala ina i7na in7eb ba3ath. o lama i5ti sme3at hal shay matkalemni o matkalemha z3alat 3alaina i7na il athnain. Itgol inta matadri shno sowalifha o madri aish.

Lamees: ok bader… o shil ma6loob mini?

Bader: salamtich, bas kint bawathi7lich il mawtho3.

Lamees: watha7ta o ba3dain.

Bader: laish t7acheeni chethi ?

Lamees: shlon tabini a7acheeek?? ana lama kint abi aseer ur friend u used to push me away al7en lama inta tabi itfathfethli tabini asme3ek ya3ni?

Bader: Lamees.

Lamees: na3aam?

Bader: mategdereen t7awleen ma3a ahalich mara thanya?

Lamees: La bader ma agdar.

Bader: laaiish ?

Lamees: inta awal 7el moshkeltik weya bint 5altik awal!!!

Bader: lat5afeen in7alat.

Lamees: lail7en a7isik chathab bader. o mani gadra asadgik.

Bader: ana chathab?

Lamees: ee.

Bader: yeslam rasich lamees, bas bathbetlich ini mo chathab.

Lamees: ok yala ma3a il salama.

Bader: bye.

“What the hell have i done?! Why am i talking to him that way!?” She started crying so hard, that she couldnt see what was infront of her. She managed to get to her friends house, called her friend that she was outside, not knowing how her friend understood what she said mid-sobs. Her friend came running down, and saw lamees get out of her car her eyes and nose were bloodshot red. She ran and hugged lamees, and she collapsed in her arms.

Two days later Lamees was sitting in the living room, staring at the TV. She was still a body without a soul, she was a zombie. Her mother came and sat down next to her.

Mother: Lamees, intay mkalma bader?

Lamees: Ha? Laish?

Mother: oma dagat mara thanya.

“Bathbetlich ini mo chathab”

Lamees: Laish?!

And her mother smiled with tears in her eyes.

Mother: ya56ebech mara thanya.

Without thinking Lamees threw herself on her mothers lap and started crying, and screaming.

Lamees: Yuma alaah i5aleech wafqaaay! Yumaa alah i5aleeeech! allah i5aleekom yuma 7isaw feeeni! Yuma matadreen shkether i7ibni wa7ebaa! Wala il 3atheem 5osh wa7ed! laish matsadgooniiii??? Walaaa yuma i7ibniiiii! Alah i5aleech yuma lata7remoona min ba3ath! 7aram 3alaikom!!!!!!! ili sawaitoooh feeni mo shwayaaaa!!!!! 7araaaam 3alaiiikoooooooooooom!!

She looked up and her mother was crying too.

Mother: obooch mara7 yertha Lamees.

Lamees: ana akalmaaa!! wala ana akalma!

Mother: La 5aleeni ana akalma.

She couldnt believe her mother was saying that, she stared right through her eyes, “was she joking? ga3da ta5ethni 3ala gad 3agli wela shno?”

Lamees: shno?

Mother: ana akalma.

Lamees: intay mwafqa?

Mother: La, bas mo raftha. Wlani meste3eda ashofich chethi baji 3umrich.

Lamees jumped up and hugged her mother so hard. “Mo raftha! aham shay inha o raftha!!”

The next couple of days were not easy, everyone found out, her brothers and sister. Her aunts and uncles, everyone had a different opinion. Her brothers and father didnt talk to her, and her sister and aunts were on her side along with her mother. This was the final battle in this war. Everytime she saw her father she started begging him with her eyes, she flaunted her tears infront of him, just so that he would feel sorry for her and change his mind. But this time, it was different, she had hope. Her mother was with her, she had even spoken with Bader, talking about religon and everything, Oo Bader already gayel ina ohwa meste3ed ighayer mathheba 3ashani, o i3yalna ikonon 3ala mathhabna, Lamees didnt like that. She wanted him to have his own beliefs and out of that they’d manage and they would work it out. But he seemed to convince Lamees’ mother. And she was fine with that, just as long her mother was fine too.

Lamees didnt stop trying, she tried and tried and tried……….








































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2 years later, Lamees got married, and had just found out that she was pregnant. She was hysteric and called her mother.

Lamees: yumaa.. (crying and laughing at the same time)

Mother: haw shfeeeech?!

Lamees: yumaa barkeeeliiiii…

Mother: shno mabrook? 5air inshala. 5ara3teeeniii yuma!

Lamees: yuma ana 7aamil..

Mother: (tyabib) ba3ad 3umrii 3al baraka! ya galbii wala bshara hathiii.. (and she starts crying too)

Lamees: inzain bas ne6ray latgooleen 7ag a7ad ok.

Mother: ee la akeed, intay shlonich al7een 3asa mako lo3a o do5a?

Lamees: la yuma il 7imdela πŸ™‚

Mother: alf il 7imdela, waay yafar7eti wala lo agol 7ag oboch ib yestanis πŸ™‚

Lamees: 5alas yuma ana basakra al7een. akalmich ba3dain ok?

Mother: 5alas inshala, ta3alay moreena 3ad.

Lamees: inshala, yala bye.

Mother: ma3a il salama.

As soon as she closed the door, her husband walked in. And her heart started beating, so fast, and tears ran down her cheeks. She was smiling too. Her husband walked towards her looking concerned.

Lamees: Bader, ana 7amel.


**The End**

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58 Comments »

  1. HOULIEE Said:

    AAAAAH !!
    I loved it!!!
    Waay waay!!!
    Ya7ilouhum!

  2. Enchantuer Said:

    heheheheh ashwa u loved ;p thank u wayed ;***

  3. *sniff sniff*
    allaaaaaah… 5ooooooosh 3eediyah!

  4. finallyyyyy!!
    a happy ending =D
    ambaih i love love loved it!
    it was amazing
    7addy i fell in love with bader!

    ps: does he have a brother? πŸ˜‰

  5. um-mit3ib Said:

    FINALLLYY !!! πŸ˜›

  6. Enchantuer Said:

    am so glad u liked it u guys πŸ˜€ oo dandoon ee 3inda;p eheheheh

  7. Ruby Woo Said:

    oooh she’s pregenant ;p
    al7een a6alib fe qisat 7ub bint`ha!!

  8. Enchantuer Said:

    heheheheh ta5ayelay ;p were guna have to wait a looooooooong time for that story though

  9. anonymous Said:

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    WALA GHOREGAAT 3YOOONYY :”””D WAAY WAAY WAAAY

    lamaa omhaa galaaat en mo raftha .. ana akalmaa .. WAAAAAAAY !!! 7adeee 7abait el om !!!!!
    waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyy

    galbe gam yelga3 men l far7aa wala a7es ba9eee7 πŸ˜› looool

    waaaay waaaay waaay happy ending WANASAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

    ahahahahahaha wala khalaitene a3ayed gabel el 3eeeeeeed :D:D:D:D:D

    THAAANKS ;*** hehehehehe yalla kathray men hal qesas πŸ˜›

    loool waaay latshoofeny wala meshta6a πŸ˜› loool

    waay waaay many gadr asay6er 3ala enfe3ali looool

  10. Enchantuer Said:

    loooooooooool wanasaaaaaaaa πŸ˜› 7adi kayaft tooooo !!! πŸ˜€ thank uuu ;**** ana katba qesa men gabel ;p ill send it to u ba3dain ;p oo it’ll take a while 3ala ma akteb qesa thanya ;p

  11. anonymous Said:

    ee eeeeeee send send πŸ˜› lool

    wala ana emkayfa akthar menech lol πŸ˜› ma sheftay my comment 6ol ur post hahahaha πŸ˜›

  12. hq Said:

    YAAAAY!!!!
    but im sad that it ended, now i dont have a story to look forward to ;(

    yalla new story? ;p

  13. Enchantuer Said:

    anon: eeeeeeee ;p eheheheh give me ur email i will send ;p

    hq: awwwwwww :$ inshala someday just not right now ;p im so glad u like it ;p

  14. anonymous Said:

    qanafa@gmail.com πŸ˜€

    ee wala al7een shino nan6er πŸ˜›

  15. Enchantuer Said:

    ne6raw my regular posts ! :@ wela mo 3ajbenkom?!:P:@

  16. aaaw thnxx..=*
    loved it!!=)

  17. Enchantuer Said:

    charm: eheheh thanx 3ala shno?;p thank u intay for liking it ;*

  18. anonymous Said:

    laa laa 3ajbena bs ya3ni ta3awadna 3ala el qesa:P

  19. Enchantuer Said:

    eheheheeh zain ashwa:$

  20. anonymous Said:

    ENCHAAAAAAAAAA !!!
    YOU WROTE THIS STORY !!!!

    AMBEEEEEEH !! GAREET’HA!

  21. Enchantuer Said:

    eeee :$ ehehehe i wrote in high school ;p

  22. anonymous Said:

    la7tha la7tha chene thaya3t .. wait khal arakez

    3endech eyahao entay katbat’ha 3adel men ghair caps o hal suwalef? cause moz3eja lol

    la7tha! … ana a3areq el bedaya .. bs el nehaya makant chethy :S

  23. Enchantuer Said:

    huh;/ la that was always the ending o hathi il “original” copy

  24. anonymous Said:

    mo akher shay emot ya3qoub?? ana eli gareet’ha ena akher shay emot ya3gob! 7ata i have it!

    wait adawerha o at’akad

  25. Enchantuer Said:

    ee hathi ihya !!!! πŸ˜›

  26. jooj Said:

    cuuuuuuuteeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! can’t wait for the rest!!
    bas wallaah che suspense that LONG gap hahah

  27. Enchantuer Said:

    looooool eheheh ee 7arakat;p inzain ay rest 5alisat il qesa!!:P

  28. anonymous Said:

    loool bs eli dazeeteha ya3qoub mamat πŸ˜›
    looooooooooool .. ana ethay3a mo embayen 3ende kil el qesa lazem ar3as 3aleh 3ashan te6la3

    tawha bayanat kamla

    hehehe ya7leelech entay katbat’aha walal mashallah 3aleech πŸ˜€

  29. Enchantuer Said:

    loooool ok 5tara3t! 3abali b3ad imsaween fake versions of the story ;p eheheh bro7a sayra mashaakel 3ala hal qesa!:p kel wa7da isimha sara galat “eeee hathi qeseetii” !!! 😐 3AMAAAA!!!!!!

  30. Style Express Said:

    YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!! I LOVE IT!!! abi a3arif 3an there marriage life hhahhaha:P

  31. Enchantuer Said:

    ba3aaaaaaaad?;p ashoof afaker;p:$

  32. anonymous Said:

    haaaw shino eb mazajhom rakebaw el qesa 3aleehom:|

    lol wala 7ata ana ekhtara3t 7abali emghayreb bel qesa πŸ˜›

  33. Enchantuer Said:

    7abalich imghayreb il qesa?!:P eheheh shiftay shloon?:( al7en ana ta3bana o katba il qesa 😦 yeg3edon o igolon malat’hom?!:O

  34. anonymous Said:

    ee πŸ˜› ana agol yaarbe nehayat’ha mo chethy . bs hathe ehya πŸ˜›

    lool 7aram mesakeen yabon eeshon el dor πŸ˜›

  35. Enchantuer Said:

    ee wala ;p

  36. anonymous Said:

    al7een u owe me another story πŸ˜› hathe a3arefha πŸ˜› lol

  37. Enchantuer Said:

    inzain bas mo al7eeen :$ ni6ray sintain ;p

  38. anonymous Said:

    ola senteeeen 😐

    hehehe . enshallah yala maykhalef cause lil7een met’athra eb lamees πŸ˜› lol

  39. Enchantuer Said:

    loooooool ill try to make it one dnt worry ;p

  40. Hi there Enchantuer πŸ™‚
    Though I have read your amazing story all the way to its end, I have never posted a comment. And this is my first…
    OH MY GOD!!! really beautiful story. You have your own way to make us hold our breaths min galb!! hehe
    Love the suspense. 3ajeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeb…
    Alah ya36eech il3aafya dear πŸ™‚ Keep them coming.

    Love your blog πŸ™‚

  41. delicatelyrealistic Said:

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!
    Happy ending!!
    Kloooolooooooooosh !!

  42. amethystos Said:

    I like your other story better;p

  43. Enchantuer Said:

    blu: awww thank u :$ that is so sweet of u oo alah i3afeech ;***

    dr: heheheheh yaaay ;p

    amethyst: yeah me 2;p !!!!

  44. PaLoMiNo Said:

    WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII ;*****

  45. Tiger Said:

    3edech mubarak o i’ll get back to you when i read all the 10 parts hehe, don’t hate me 3ad πŸ™‚

  46. Enchantuer Said:

    palomino:p eheheh u like?;p

    tiger: ayamik sa3eeda;p not hating dont worry ;p

  47. 3anooda Said:

    wallah il 3atheem ini i feel so stupid oo gimt a9ee7. LOOOL.

    I LOVE it – lakin ba3adni i wanna read it from the beginning

  48. Enchantuer Said:

    awwwwww ;p 3adi ana aktebha wabchi ;p ehheheheh laish magaraiteeha min il bedaya 7asafa!!

  49. Sh7afana Said:

    mani 3arfa shagool. 7a6aitayyy eeeeedech 3al jar7. i wish he could have fought for me the way bader it… allah kareem.. oo allah ewafegkum yarab wetamem 3alaikum o esahelukum darbkum! ;* ameen!

  50. Enchantuer Said:

    sh7afanaaaaaaaa:'( inshala aalaah i3awthech ib wa7ed zain o yestahlich oo a7san min bader ba3ad;p golaaaaaay ameeeeeeeeeeeeen!!!

  51. eshda3wa Said:

    3eedich imbarak babe

  52. um-mit3ib Said:

    sh7afana mataby a7san min bader
    sh7afana taby bader:P

  53. Sh7afana Said:

    HAHAHA.. ee hal bader ana a7ebba ;p

  54. purelyorchid Said:

    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!! wanasaaaaaaa!!
    hehehe jabalt il screeen oo I was screaming!! yaaaay
    god I diiiiie for happy endings;p… i’m so proud of ur writing babe;**

  55. Anonymous Said:

    entay weenech !! khalesat el qesa o ekhtefaitay mathalan! 😐

  56. slai7e6 Said:

    am not happy with the ending =p
    tawnee bade agra ur blog o 7abait elqesa bas ma fahamt al7eeen
    meno fehom kan shee3i o meno kan seni ?
    o in the long run eb te6la3 il differences etha mo bainhom bain elahal
    they’re in for some hard/tough times
    bas alla ywafeghom . etha 9ej =p

  57. Zainoba Said:

    Woow, first time I visited your Blog and I saw the Love Stroy part 10. I tracked it down to Part 1 and started reading it at work. I read it continuously upto to the end and I totally loved it. Bader is amazing Mashallah!

    Keep em stories coming In πŸ™‚

  58. Enchantuer Said:

    slai7e6: slai7e6 mabayant mno il sini wel shee3i 3ashan maykon ako 7asaseya ib hal mawtho3 some people might get offended. Oo fee nas wayed itha they love each other enough they could over come anything, o im sorry u didnt like the ending ;p it was a happy one though!

    Zainoba: thank uuuuuuuu ;*** im so happy u liked it oo inshala ill write some soon!


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